Homework _ 11/30
학생이 쓴 원문
[1] What do you like most about your daughter?
==> I love my daughter because she is cute and active.
She wants to stay with me but I can't spend a lot of time with her
because I am always busy.
whenever I have a time I try to play with her and to spend times with her.
[2] To whom do you take your hat off? Why is that?
==> I respect my parents.
They lived in a difficult environment but they worked hard for us.
Thanks to their effort, we are living in better environment.
That's reason why I respect my parents.
강사 첨삭
Way to go, James!
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I hope you feel that your writing is improving each time you write.
Always raise the bar higher, my friend!
May you continue to have a safe time.
-Klein-
[1] What do you like most about your daughter?==> I love my daughter because she is cute and active.>>Correct
She wants to stay with me but I can\'t spend a lot of time with her because I am always busy.
>>Correctwhenever I have a time I try to play with her and to spend times with her.>>Correct
OR >> (capitalization) Whenever I have time, I try to spend time with her.
*spend time/play[2] To whom do you take your hat off? Why is that?==> I respect my parents.
>>Correct!They lived in a difficult environment but they worked hard for us.
>>CorrectThanks to their effort, we are living in better environment.>>Correct
That\'s reason why I respect my parents.
>>That\'s the reason that I respect them.
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