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2016-12-01 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

학생이 쓴 원문

[1] What do you like most about your daughter? ==> I love my daughter because she is cute and active. She wants to stay with me but I can't spend a lot of time with her because I am always busy. whenever I have a time I try to play with her and to spend times with her. [2] To whom do you take your hat off? Why is that? ==> I respect my parents. They lived in a difficult environment but they worked hard for us. Thanks to their effort, we are living in better environment. That's reason why I respect my parents.

강사 첨삭

Way to go, James! It\'s always a pleasure reading your compositions. Thank you for completing my day again. I got to know you better through this. Thanks for trusting me. I hope you feel that your writing is improving each time you write. Always raise the bar higher, my friend! May you continue to have a safe time. -Klein- [1] What do you like most about your daughter?==> I love my daughter because she is cute and active.>>Correct She wants to stay with me but I can\'t spend a lot of time with her because I am always busy. >>Correctwhenever I have a time I try to play with her and to spend times with her.>>Correct OR >> (capitalization) Whenever I have time, I try to spend time with her. *spend time/play[2] To whom do you take your hat off? Why is that?==> I respect my parents. >>Correct!They lived in a difficult environment but they worked hard for us. >>CorrectThanks to their effort, we are living in better environment.>>Correct That\'s reason why I respect my parents. >>That\'s the reason that I respect them.

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