Homework 11.30 / few close friends VS many friends
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What are the benefits of having just a few close friends? How about the benefits of having many friends?
: There are many advantages of having just a few close friends. For example, we can form strong bonding between just a few friends more t[이름] between a lot of friends. But If we have many friends, we can meet various kinds of friends. And we will make a lot of various experiences.
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There are many advantages of having just a few close friends.
>> There are many advantages to having just a few close friends.
For example, we can form strong bonding between just a few friends more t[이름] between a lot of friends.
>> CORRECT!
But If we have many friends, we can meet various kinds of friends.
>> CORRECT!
And we will make a lot of various experiences.
>> CORRECT!
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