Homework 11.31 / About \'bullying\'
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What springs to mind when you hear the word ‘bullying’?
Do you think bullying should be made a crime or is it part of growing up?
: I think bullying should be made a crime definitely. Because there are victims who have to live with trauma forever. Also, It isn\'t part of growing up. In part of growing up, we have a precious lessons or something. But bullying have no lessons. I think bullying should not be forgiven.
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I think bullying should be made a crime definitely.
>> CORRECT!
Because there are victims who have to live with trauma forever.
>> CORRECT!
Also, It isn\'t part of growing up. In part of growing up, we have a precious lessons or something.
>> Also, It isn\'t part of growing up. In the part of growing up, we have precious lessons or something.
But bullying have no lessons. I think bullying should not be forgiven.
>> But bullying has no lessons. I think bullying should not be forgiven.
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