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it is my mom's house remodeling. at April I start it. first I change old TV , air conditioner, sofa . second change the bed cover, pillow and pillow cover. they are dirty and old. and finally I will change her kitchen. for example kitchen sink and shelf. may be It willbe started next month. My mom gave me a lot of money. and my yonger brother gave me some money. so I need to change her house. and It is hardworking for me. because her house is far from here. but It's my pleasure .

Good afternoon [이름]! Welcome to the composition site. ^^ Thank you so much for sending in an essay. It is nice to hear that you be able to show your creativeness. I am sure that your mom will like it. See you in class. Teacher Nina   it is my mom\'s house remodeling. at April I start it. >> I started remodelling my mom\'s house since April. first I change old TV , air conditioner, sofa . >> First, I changed the old TV, air conditioner and sofa. second change the bed cover, pillow and pillow cover. >> Second, I also changed the bed cover, pillow and pillow cases. they are dirty and old. >> correct and finally I will change her kitchen. >> Finally, I will change the things in her kitchen. for example kitchen sink and shelf. >> correct may be It willbe started next month. >> Maybe, i wil start with it next month.My mom gave me a lot of money. >> correct and my yonger brother gave me some money. >> Better: And my younger brother gave me some money, too. so I need to change her house. >> So, I need to modify her house. and It is hardworking for me. because her house is far from here. but It\'s my pleasure . >> It is difficult for me because her house is far from here, but it is my pleasure to do it. >> OR: It will be a difficult task for me because her house is far from here, but it is my pleasure to do it.