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2015-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear [Name] friend Jeny. I went to pc care center at 9:00 AM. The man being there check and says that pc is completely broken down, and can know recovery availiability of all files after 1 hour. Therefore i do my homework via mobile. It's too difficult to type on the mobile due to not being familiar with this. Maybe i could not anythings to do today because of I have to recover pc prioritly . By the way, thanks for your undeserved praise. ==body == I get along well with many kind of persons. They are mainly true and sincete and considerable others. There are many persorns around me, containing senior,junior,colleague and even to neighbor.

강사 첨삭

Hello Oh!!! The good thing is you can still recover your files. hehehhehe I do believe that you are determine to enhance your abilities in English. I need to correct you more often so that you should be aware for your mistakes. See yourself as a person who will be successful. So don\'t pull yourself down I know you can do it! T. Jeny     Dear [Name] friend Jeny. >>correctI went to pc care center at 9:00 AM. >>I went to the Pc care center at 9:00 AM. The man being there check and says that pc is completely broken down, and can know recovery availiability of all files after 1 hour. >>The man at the center checked and said that the PC had completely  broken down, and he wasn\'t sure if he can recover all the files after an hour.Therefore i do my homework via mobile. >>So, I did my homework via mobile.It\'s too difficult to type on the mobile due to not being familiar with this. >>It\'s too difficult to type on my mobile phone because I\'m not familiar with it.Maybe i could not anythings to do today because of I have to recover pc prioritly . Maybe I couldn\'t do anything today because my priority is to recover my PC.By the way, thanks for your undeserved praise. >>correct==body == I get along well with many kind of persons. >>I get along well with many kinds of people.They are mainly true and sincete and considerable others. >>They are mainly true, sincere and considerable to others.There are many persorns around me, containing senior,junior,colleague and even to neighbor. >>There are many people around me like my seniors, juniors , colleagues and even my neighbors.

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