Homework 11

ESSAY: What do you think is the most expensive thing that Koreans pay for? In my opinion, Koreans pay for the house the most expensive. In Korea, it is very hard to have one's own home even after marriage. So, having own home could be one's objective when people become thirties. In my case, I'm saving money to buy my home in the future for 4 years with my allowance. When Koreans get married, they need their home to start staying with family, but it is so expensive that some people can not buy their home and stay with broom's family together.

Hi there [이름]!^^ Thank you for expressing yourself with this homework!^^ A house is worth it to save for. It\'s a great investment not only for oneself but also for you own family in the future!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: In my opinion, Koreans pay for the house the most expensive. >> In my opinion, Koreans paying for the house is the most expensive thing. In Korea, it is very hard to have one\'s own home even after marriage. >> CORRECT OR>  In Korea, it is difficult to own your own house even after you are married. So, having own home could be one\'s objective when people become thirties. >> So, having your own home could be one\'s objective when people reach their thirties. In my case, I\'m saving money to buy my home in the future for 4 years with my allowance. >> CORRECT OR> For me, I have a savings of four years for my home in the future.When Koreans get married, they need their home to start staying with family, but it is so expensive that some people can not buy their home and stay with broom\'s family together. >> When Koreans get married, they need their home to start staying with a family, but it is so expensive that some people can not buy their home and they just stay with the groom\'s family together.