Homework(11/7): Best gift

Friend Jen. First of all, I also want to continue to learn English after this course ending on Nov-21st and also want to be taught by you. How about do you think that?. = Body = The best gift that I have ever received are My wife, my son and daughter. I think I am a lucky guy. Thanks for God's gift. As I've said so far, My wife have only lived for my family and She is always on my side when i was difficult or i was happy. My son graduated from Seoul University, the best top one of university in Korea and only 0.1 percentage of students are able to enter. i hoped that my son does NOT become a man of genius BUT have a sound mind. As my wish, he is becoming a sound-minded genius. In the future, I hope he will work for other people, our country and furthermore for world's miserable people. Finally, My daughter is very beautiful girl and now she has been working for Lee & Ko law firm, 2nd large law firm in Korea, as secretary of a lawyer. What more gift could i want?

Hello OH!!!

I would love to teach you, Oh. It is my pleasure!!!!

Thank you for answering our homework for today. I know that this activity could really enhance your skills in English. Just believe in yourself that you can achieve your goals in speaking the English language.

Your family is also very lucky to have you!!! I am proud of you and your family!!!

T. Jeny

 

Friend Jen.

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First of all, I also want to continue to learn English after this course ending on Nov-21st and also want to be taught by you.

>>First of all, I want to continue learning English after this course ends on November 21 and I stiil want you to teach me.
How about do you think that?.
>>What do you think?
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The best gift that I have ever received are My wife, my son and daughter.

>>The best gifts that I\'ve ever received are from my wife, son and daughter.
I think I am a lucky guy.

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Thanks for God\'s gift.

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As I\'ve said so far,

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My wife have only lived for my family and She is always on my side when i was difficult or i was happy.

>>My wife has only lived for my family and she is always on my side in difficult times and happy times as well.
My son graduated from Seoul University, the best top one of university in Korea and only 0.1 percentage of students are able to enter.

>>My son graduated from Seoul University, the best university in Korea and only 0.1 percentage of students are able to enter.
i hoped that my son does NOT become a man of genius BUT have a sound mind.

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As my wish, he is becoming a sound-minded genius.

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In the future, I hope he will work for other people, our country and furthermore for world\'s miserable people.

>>In the future, I hope that he will work for other people, our country and furthermore for the world\'s miserable/ unfortunate people.
Finally, My daughter is very beautiful girl and now she has been working for Lee & Ko law firm, 2nd large law firm in Korea, as secretary of a lawyer.

>>Finally, my daughter is a very beautiful girl and now she has been working for Lee & Ko law firm, the 2nd largest law firm in Korea, as secretary of a lawyer.

What more gift could i want?

>>What more could I ask for?