homework (11/9)
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that
If we are having good life,
It need heaIth so , It is very important for our life.
there are many good food ,good activity and excercise. these days.
most of people they want to healthy.
I
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]. ^^
I hope that you are having a good day.
You are right. Health is wealth. It is very important for us to be healthy.
We should always find ways on how to be fit. Thank you so much for sending this in. See you. Teacher Nina
I think that If we are having good life, It need heaIth so , It is very important for our life.
>> Did you mean: I think to have a good life, we need to be healthy and it is very important. there are many good food ,good activity and excercise.
>> Did you mean: There are many delicious foods, good activities and exercises that we can do.
these days. most of people they want to healthy.
>> Most of people want to be healthy these days. I
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