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2017-11-11 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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HOMEWORK: ** What 2 things make you feel happy every day? How do these things make you happy? >> The one thing is the smile of my family. When I finish my work and com back home, They fully appreciate with smile. At this time, I would fill up with happiness. The second thing is the moment that I solve the difficult problem about my work. Although some problems make me to concern for a long time and spend hard time, finally I got the solution and have approch the meaningful moment with happiness.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Allen!


Good evening to you. ^^

Thank you for sharing about the 2 things that make you happy.

I know that your family means a lot to you, so you prioritize your family.

I\'m glad to know this one. ^_^

Continue to be a good father or a good provider.

Have a nice weekend!


_Teacher Dianne ^_^


HOMEWORK:
** What 2 things make you feel happy every day? How do these things make you happy?

>> correct

>> The one thing is the smile of my family.
When I finish my work and com back home, They fully appreciate with smile.
At this time, I would fill up with happiness.

>> The first thing that makes me happy is when I see the smile of my family. When I finish my work and come back home, they fully appreciate and greet me with a smile. I\'m filled with happiness at this time.

  The second thing is the moment that I solve the difficult problem about my work.
Although some problems make me to concern for a long time and spend hard time,
finally I got the solution and have approch the meaningful moment with happiness.

>>  The second thing that makes me happy is the moment that I solve a difficult problem about my work. Although some problems make me concerned or think for a long time or spend a hard time, but eventually I will get the solution. This is the time that I approach a meaningful moment with happiness.

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