Homework 11/9
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Allen!
Good evening to you. ^^
Thank you for sharing about the 2 things that make you happy.
I know that your family means a lot to you, so you prioritize your family.
I\'m glad to know this one. ^_^
Continue to be a good father or a good provider.
Have a nice weekend!
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
HOMEWORK:
** What 2 things make you feel happy every day? How do these things make you happy?
>> correct
>> The one thing is the smile of my family.
When I finish my work and com back home, They fully appreciate with smile.
At this time, I would fill up with happiness.
>> The first thing that makes me happy is when I see the smile of my family. When I finish my work and come back home, they fully appreciate and greet me with a smile. I\'m filled with happiness at this time.
The second thing is the moment that I solve the difficult problem about my work.
Although some problems make me to concern for a long time and spend hard time,
finally I got the solution and have approch the meaningful moment with happiness.
>> The second thing that makes me happy is the moment that I solve a difficult problem about my work. Although some problems make me concerned or think for a long time or spend a hard time, but eventually I will get the solution. This is the time that I approach a meaningful moment with happiness.
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