homework 11/9 Filling in the blanks

2015-11-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Dear my friend Jeny. Thanks for your advise and I want to talk about my business tomorrow. Even though being busy, i will prepare my business to talk about you. Have a remaining times today! = body = 1. At night most climbers took their gloves off, but I preferred to keep them on. 2. Forty-five years ago, a handful of Americans declared April 22, 1970 to be Earth Day. 3. It is true that there have been several attempts to brighten the lives of workers; however, an average factory worker is rather to be pitied than envied. 4. In the olden days, before the discovery of anesthetics, various methods had used to keep the patient quiet during an operation. 5. The specter that has been haunting our country represents both an opportunity and a challenge.

강사 첨삭

Hello Oh!!!

I am sorry because you still have to prepare for our topic tomorrow hehehehe....but if you don\'t have tine to prepare. It\'s fine with me...no pressure!!!

Thank you for your homework, you got a perfect score so it means your learning a lot. Great job!!!

|T. Jeny

Dear my friend Jeny.
>>correct
Thanks for your advise and I want to talk about my business tomorrow.

>>correct
Even though being busy, i will prepare my business to talk about you.

>>Even tough I am busy, I will prepare about our topic tomorrow.
Have a remaining times today!
>>Have a wonderful day!
= body =
1. At night most climbers took their gloves off, but I preferred to keep them on.
>>correct
2. Forty-five years ago, a handful of Americans declared April 22, 1970 to be Earth Day.
>>correct
3. It is true that there have been several attempts to brighten the lives of workers; however, an average factory worker is rather to be pitied than envied.
>>correct
4. In the olden days, before the discovery of anesthetics, various methods had used to keep the patient quiet during an operation.
>>correct
5. The specter that has been haunting our country represents both an opportunity and a challenge.

>>correct

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