homework
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Are any of your friends or family video game addicts?
my family don\'t play any video games. but some of my friends are definitely addicts of video games.
They spent a lot of times and money in their games. I don\'t play any video games, so I can\'t understand them.
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my family don\'t play any video games.
>>> My family doesn\'t play video games.
but some of my friends are definitely addicts of video games.
>>> But some of my friends are definitely addicted to video games.
They spent a lot of times and money in their games.
>>> They spent a lot of time and money on the game.
I don\'t play any video games, so I can\'t understand them.
>>> CORRECT!
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