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2021-06-07 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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I will take a break from class today.This is because the Corona vaccination is scheduled close to Phone English. But I upload my homework. I think I was stingy with money from adults.Because it was a tight economy for me to live in.

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Good morning Ms. [Name] [이름]! Thank you for telling me about your day :) Stay strong!
~Aki:)
I will take a break from class today.
>>>CORRECT 
>>> I will not be taking the class today.
This is because the Corona vaccination is scheduled close to Phone English.
>>>This is because my vaccination schedule is almost  close to my class in Phone English.
But I upload my homework.
>>> But I uploaded my homework.
 I think I was stingy with money from adults.
>>> I think I need to become stingy since I am already an adult.
Because it was a tight economy for me to live in.
>>> Because the economy is becoming tight and I need to save my money for the future.


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