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Usually korea haircut cost is 10000won
10000won is 10dollars
Usually 10000won is man of cost
Woman haircut cost is 15000won
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Here are my corrections for you:
Usually korea haircut cost is 10000won
>> Usually, a haircut in Korea costs 10000 won
10000won is 10dollars
>> 10000 won is 10 dollars.
Usually 10000won is man of cost
>> Usually, 10000 won is how much a man\'s haircut costs.
Woman haircut cost is 15000won
>> For women, a haircut costs 15000 won.
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