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What\'s your motto in life?
I think the most important thing in my life is a relationship. Regarding relationships, I believe trust and respect are the most important so those are my motto.
Without trust and respect, we can\'t make sincere relations with other people. If there\'s no trust and respect between some people, they will suspect and gossip with each other always.
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Hi Homer!
A motto can help you change a habit. An essential aspect of willpower is the ability to remember your long-term goal. A motto can succinctly summarize why you want to change a habit and therefore increase your willpower.
I think the most important thing in my life is a relationship.
>> I think the most important thing in my life is relationship.
Regarding relationships, I believe trust and respect are the most important so those are my motto.
>> Regarding relationships, I believe that trust and respect are the most important thing so those are my motto.
Without trust and respect, we can\'t make sincere relations with other people.
>> CORRECT
If there\'s no trust and respect between some people, they will suspect and gossip with each other always.
>> If there\'s no trust and respect between people, they will suspect and gossip with each other always.
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