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What do you think should the government of South Korea focus on?
I think the Korean government should reduce wasted financial amount of welfare. There are lots of policies to support underprivileged people. However, since the criteria of selecting applicants, is not very precise, unnecessary people are exploiting those policies despite they don\'t really need to get help. So, I hope the Korean government set and check more specifically before conducting welfare policies.
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Hi Homer!
Governments in emerging economies have, over the decades, tried many different policy agendas to stimulate development, accelerate growth, alleviate poverty, and achieve any number of other goals to mixed success. Nowadays, the urgent problem is regarding the pandemic. They work really hard on how to improve their country and their people as well. Your ideas are great. Thanks for sharing. :)
I think the Korean government should reduce wasted financial amount of welfare.
>> I think the Korean government should reduce financial waste on welfare.
There are lots of policies to support underprivileged people.
>> CORRECT
However, since the criteria of selecting applicants, is not very precise, unnecessary people are exploiting those policies despite they don\'t really need to get help.
>> However, since the criteria of selecting applicants is not very precise, unnecessary people are exploiting those policies despite the fact that they don\'t need any help.
So, I hope the Korean government set and check more specifically before conducting welfare policies.
>> CORRECT
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