Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. What kind of qualities do you look for in a friend?
A. I used to look for kindness in people. Even if I\'ve been close with them for a long time, it’s not easy for me to keep that relationship if they’re rude.
Also it\'s important how they think about their lives.
I’d like to see and share some bright parts at everything with positive people.
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Jasmin
I used to look for kindness in people.
>>I look for the inner beauty of people.
Even if I\'ve been close with them for a long time, it’s not easy for me to keep that relationship if they’re rude.
>>It\'s not easy for me to keep a good relationship with people if they are rude even if we\'ve known each other for a long time.
Also it\'s important how they think about their lives.
>>Also it\'s important to be with the people who think about their future.
I’d like to see and share some bright parts at everything with positive people.
>>I\'d like to be with the people who have a positive mindset and together we can spread positivity.
Jasmin
I used to look for kindness in people.
>>I look for the inner beauty of people.
Even if I\'ve been close with them for a long time, it’s not easy for me to keep that relationship if they’re rude.
>>It\'s not easy for me to keep a good relationship with people if they are rude even if we\'ve known each other for a long time.
Also it\'s important how they think about their lives.
>>Also it\'s important to be with the people who think about their future.
I’d like to see and share some bright parts at everything with positive people.
>>I\'d like to be with the people who have a positive mindset and together we can spread positivity.
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