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학생이 쓴 원문
Q. Do you think that art is important to society? Why?
A. When I exhausted from work or something, I used to go to museum or listen to my favorite music.
It refreshes me and gets me feel better.
Sometimes a good film makes me more creative person and sometimes a nice song encourages me when I’m depressed.
Art makes our lives more various and colorful.
강사 첨삭
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Jasmin.
>>When I\'m exhausted from work or from anything that\'s going on around me, I used to go to museums or listen to my favorite music.
It refreshes me and gets me feel better.
>>It refreshes me and it makes me feel better.
Sometimes a good film makes me more creative person and sometimes a nice song encourages me when I’m depressed.
>>A good movie can activate my imagination and a nice song can motivate me when I feel down.
Art makes our lives more various and colorful.
>>Art makes our lives diverse and colorful.
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