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2021-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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Thank you for always giving me feedback quickly. I\'m writing down the famous words you sent me elsewhere. <Homework answer.> I don\'t have a role model among people. If I had to tell you, I would say that Paul of the Bible is my role model.

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Good morning Ms. [Name] [이름]! I am happy that you always find time to do your homework and send me a message. Thank you too for checking your student page. Keep u the good work!
~Aki :)
Thank you for always giving me feedback quickly. 
>>> Thank you for giving me always a quick feedback.
I\'m writing down the famous words you sent me elsewhere.
>>> I\'m writing down your corrections that you provided.
I don\'t have a role model among people.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> I don\'t find any role model among people.
 If I had to tell you, I would say that Paul of the Bible is my role model.
>>> CORRECT
OR >>> If I had to consider that, then Paul of the Bible is my role model.

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