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When I meet someone first, I supposed to notice his or her apperance.
Because apperance is easy to notice by just seeing him.
Second I notice his or her character.
Weather he is deligent or lazy, positive or negative, frugal or waster.....
Or he can collect sonething one of a kind.
Third I notice his circumstance.
Like job, family, hometown, wealth.
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1. When I meet someone first, I supposed to notice his or her apperance.
>> When I first meet someone, I am supposed to notice his or her appearance.
>> When I first meet someone, I am supposed to notice his or her appearance.
2. Because apperance is easy to notice by just seeing him.
>> Because appearance is easy to notice just by looking at him or her.
3. Second I notice his or her character.
>> CORRECT!
4. Weather he is deligent or lazy, positive or negative, frugal or waster.....
>> Whether he is diligent or lazy, positive or negative, frugal or spendthrift.
5. Or he can collect sonething one of a kind.
>>Or he collects something one of a kind.
>>Or he collects something one of a kind.
6. Third I notice his circumstance.
>> Thirdly, I notice his status.
7. Like job, family, hometown, wealth.
>> Like his job, family, hometown or wealth.
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