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Q. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of driving versus public transportation?
A. Usually I go to work by subway and come back driving a car. My husband and I are working for the same company, so usually my husband get my sons prepared and send them in to the daycare center bt car in the morning and I pick them up in evening.
Driving a car is more convenient when going with my boys but it requires a long time when rush hour.
When I take a subway, I can spend my time for watching short clips or reading a book because I dont need to drive by myself. But sometimes there could be an awkward person such as drunken or aggressive person.
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Jasmin
>>Usually, I ride on a subway to go to work and I go home driving my car.
My husband and I are working for the same company, so usually my husband get my sons prepared and send them in to the daycare center bt car in the morning and I pick them up in evening.
>>My husband and I work in the same company, so usually my husband takes my sons to the daycare center using our car and I pick them up in the evening.
Driving a car is more convenient when going with my boys but it requires a long time when rush hour.
Driving a car is more convenient when going with my boys but it requires a long time when rush hour.
>>Having a private car is more convenient when we are with our boys but sometimes we got stuck in the traffic on rush hours.
When I take a subway, I can spend my time for watching short clips or reading a book because I dont need to drive by myself.
When I take a subway, I can spend my time for watching short clips or reading a book because I dont need to drive by myself.
>>I can just watch video clips and read books in subway because I don\'t need to drive.
But sometimes there could be an awkward person such as drunken or aggressive person.
>>Sometimes I encounter drunk or aggressive person which is uncomfortable.
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