homework
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s comvenient to eat delivery food in Korea.
Anything i want to eat could order.
Korea delivery system have more grown by delivery application and COVID in recent years.
We can have a meal and dessert at home instead of visiting restaurant and cafe.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You did a lot of writing today! Thank you for your effort. See you next week! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
Anything I want to eat could order.
Anything I want to eat could order.
>>Anything I want to eat, I could order.
Korea delivery system have more grown by delivery application and COVID in recent years.
Korea delivery system have more grown by delivery application and COVID in recent years.
>>Korea\'s deliver system has grown more because of COVID 19 and the use of delivery applications.
We can have a meal and dessert at home instead of visiting restaurant and cafe.
We can have a meal and dessert at home instead of visiting restaurant and cafe.
>>We can have a meal and dessert at home instead of visiting restaurants and cafes.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.