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2021-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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When people meet someone for the first time, They generally would ask a age each other. It\'s because how to say each other depens on their age in Korea. So, It\'s ok to ask a age in appropriate cases.

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Hi [이름]!
Thanks so much for writing the composition today. I think you wrote it very well and there were only very minor mistakes. Keep up the good job! ^^
~~Teacher Kate

When people meet someone for the first time, They generally would ask a age each other.
>>When people meet someone for the first time, they generally would ask each other\'s age.
It\'s because how to say each other depens on their age in Korea.
>>It\'s because how  you talk to another person depends on their age in Korea.
So, It\'s ok to ask a age in appropriate cases.
>>So, It\'s ok to ask the age in appropriate cases.

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