homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1what comes to mind when you hear the word \'weekends\'?
when i traveled to phuket.
there is a boundless blue ocean. i ride a boat, swam in the ocean and saw an octopus.
i like doing activites. phuket is many things to do activity.
so i wanna go to there one more.
if i get 4days as weekends, i\'ll go to there
2what would life be like without weekends?
i don\'y have time for studying english and for exercising.
i think i can\'t work long without weekends.
i can\'t live without weekends!
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what comes to mind when you hear the word \'weekends\'?
>> 1. What comes to mind when you hear the word \"weekends\"?
when i traveled to phuket. there is a boundless blue ocean.
>> When I traveled to Phuket, I saw a boundless blue ocean.
i ride a boat, swam in the ocean and saw an octopus.
>> I rode a boat, swam in the ocean, and saw an octopus.
i like doing activites.
>> I like doing outdoor activities.
phuket is many things to do activity.
>> Phuket offers a lot of outdoor activities.
so i wanna go to there one more.
>> So, I want to go back to that place again.
if i get 4days as weekends, i\'ll go to there
>> If I get to have a four-day holiday on a weekend, I\'ll go there.
2what would life be like without weekends?
>> 2. What would life be like without weekends?
i don\'y have time for studying english and for exercising.
>> If there are no weekends, I will not have time to study English and to exercise.
i think i can\'t work long without weekends.
>> I will have to work longer too.
i can\'t live without weekends!
>> I can\'t live without weekends.
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