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If I were to make a fairy tale, I would make a mixed fairy. A mermaid and a very small fairy mixed it will can fly on the water and go around in the water! Of course, it\'s small, so it\'s cute.
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If I were to make a fairy tale, I would make a mixed fairy.
>>> CORRECT
OR: If I were to make a fairy tale, I would make a mixed type of fairy.
A mermaid and a very small fairy mixed it will can fly on the water and go around in the water!
>>> She would be a mix of a mermaid that can swim easily underwater and a small fairy that can fly.
Of course, it\'s small, so it\'s cute.
>>> CORRECT
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