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Should parents be held responsible for their children\'s behavior? Why or why not?
I think parents have a responsibility for their children\'s behavior. Children are not able to judge what is the right action so that parents have to advise them to behave in the right way. Whether parents\' direction is right or not, children will follow them since they are not aware of it.
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Hi Homer! ^^
Raising a child with good ethics and values is a tough task for every parent. Child’s development is mainly affected by the education, he or she receives from parents. Some People argue that parent should not be held accountable for their child’s act as every parent make their best effort to teach their child how to live and behave in society but how much he/she absorbs is not in anyone’s hands. Every parent tries to provide the best environment, a good role model and more of attention and care to their children.
I think parents have a responsibility for their children\'s behavior.
>> CORRECT
Children are not able to judge what is the right action so that parents have to advise them to behave in the right way.
>>Children are not able predict what is right or wrong so parents have to advise them to behave in the right way.
\\Whether parents\' direction is right or not, children will follow them since they are not aware of it.
>> Whether the parents\' directions are right or wrong, children will still follow them since they are not aware of it.
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