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If you were planning a party on a very small budget, what would you do to make it a great party?
For conducting a party, I think food and drinks are essential. To spend money more efficiently with a small budget, I would consider buying them in a market that I can buy at a cheaper price and will bring into my house or friends\' place.
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Hi Homer! ^^
That sound like a great party! Thanks for sharing. :)
For conducting a party, I think food and drinks are essential.
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To spend money more efficiently with a small budget, I would consider buying them in a market that I can buy at a cheaper price and will bring into my house or friends\' place.
>> To spend money more efficiently with a small budget, I would consider buying them in a market where I can buy at a cheaper price. After that, I will bring it to my house or friend\'s house.
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