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2021-06-15 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Do you think that we should have 3 days worth of weekend? Why or why not? Yes, because simply most of us want to have more weekends always if there\'s no deduction of salary. 2 days weekends are common in most of the world, but if we can have 3 days off per week, we can balance between work and life. I hope someday I could have a job with 3 days weekends in the future.

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Hi Homer! ^^

I think everyone would really want this, even me. Life would be more balanced this way. :) 

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Yes, because simply most of us want to have more weekends always if there\'s no deduction of salary. 
>> CORRECT

2 days weekends are common in most of the world, but if we can have 3 days off per week, we can balance between work and life. 
>> 2 days worth of weekend is common in most parts of the world. But if there would be 3 days off per week, we can balance work and life. 

I hope someday I could have a job with 3 days weekends in the future.
>> CORRECT

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