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I agree. Because the design and atmosphere of the house change depending on the person who lives in the house, I actively agree that the house resembles a house owner. So my room is cute and neat like me. and My room is moderately pink with dolls. My room is very comfortable.
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I agree. Because the design and atmosphere of the house change depending on the person who lives in the house,
>>> I agree because the design and the atmosphere of the house change depending on the person who lives in it.
I actively agree that the house resembles a house owner.
>>> CORRECT
OR: I actively agree that the house resembles the house owner.
So my room is cute and neat like me.
>>> So my room is cute and neat just like I.
and My room is moderately pink with dolls. My room is very comfortable.
>>> Also my room is moderately pink with dolls and it\'s very comfortable.
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