Homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think voting is very important for citizens

>> I think voting is very important for citizens.
Voting is fundamental to a modern state

>> Voting is fundamental to a modern state.
Voting to select a representative for society

>> Voting is to select a representative for society.
So The vote is very important

>> so in conclusion, voting is very important.

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Hi [이름], 

Thank you for diligently doing your homework. Some of your sentence constructions are correct but they are not completely correct because you forgot to put punctuations. When you end a sentence in writing, you should always put a period ( . ) at the end. Please also remember to use the proper punctuations, for example: a period ( . ) or a comma ( , ).