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When did you start your job?
I moved house three times in the last five years.
My sister have been to New York three times and she's going again next month.
The US President visited our country three times in the last two years.
After work yesterday, I went to the library.
I went there on Saterday too.
I wanted to borrow the book that I returned on Saterday.
The book is about pictures.
It explained easily to take a nice picture.
But the book was checked out already by anyone.
It was dispointed, but I was standing the bookselves to borrow other books.
At that time, My co-worker Theresa passed by me.
I tapped her on the shoulder, then she is surprised at me.
We laughed each other.
She borrowed some books of travel.
She said that she will go Thailand next month with her cousin.
Oh My God!!
Everyond around me go travel!!
강사 첨삭
Happy Thursday Miss. [Name], thank you for making your homework today..^^
I always appreciate you making your composition though you\'re very busy..
I commend you for a job well done my dear..
By the way, I think it\'s really about time for you to go on a trip,kkk..
Because if you notice, all people around you are travelling!hehehe..
I\'m hoping that you will have time to go on a trip with your mom.. :)
Talk to you again later Miss. [Name]..^^
-Teacher Cam-
When did you start your job? >>correctI moved house three times in the last five years. >>correctMy sister have been to New York three times and she\'s going again next month. >>correctThe US President visited our country three times in the last two years.>>correctAfter work yesterday, I went to the library.
>>correctI went there on Saterday too. >>correct ( Observe proper spelling of the word SATURDAY)I wanted to borrow the book that I returned on Saterday.
>>correct ( Observe proper spelling of the word SATURDAY)The book is about pictures.
>>correctIt explained easily to take a nice picture.
>>This book explains how to take pictures nicely.But the book was checked out already by anyone.
>>But the book was already borrowed by someone.It was dispointed, but I was standing the bookselves to borrow other books.
>>I was disappointed but I was still standing infront of the bookshelves to borrow some other books.At that time, My co-worker Theresa passed by me.
>>correctI tapped her on the shoulder, then she is surprised at me.
>>I tapped her on her shoulder and she was very surprised!We laughed each other.
>>We laughed at each other.She borrowed some books of travel.
>>She also borrowed some books about travelling.She said that she will go Thailand next month with her cousin.
>>She said she will go to Thailand next month with her cousin.Oh My God!!
>>correctEveryond around me go travel!!
>>Everyone around me go on a travel!
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