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HOMEWORK:
What are some different types of diets you have heard of?
some people eat one food like chicken breast, tomatoes.
in korea, there is girl-group diet. she has a sweet potato or a half of sweet potato for breakfast and has an apple for dinner. she has tomatoes for dinner.
someone i know had diet medicine. she originally weights more than 60 kilograms. now she weights less than 60kilos.
i don\'t know exactly her weights.
in korea, there is oneday one meal. when i was young, i could it. but now i want to healthy diet.
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some people eat one food like chicken breast, tomatoes.
>> Some people eat diet food like chicken breast and tomatoes.
in korea, there is girl-group diet.
>> In Korea, there is a girl-group diet.
she has a sweet potato or a half of sweet potato for breakfast and has an apple for dinner.
>> It\'s usually having a whole or half sweet potato for breakfast and an apple for dinner.
she has tomatoes for dinner.
>> Or having tomatoes for dinner.
someone i know had diet medicine. she originally weights more than 60 kilograms.
>> Someone I knew used to take diet pills, she used to weigh more than 60 kilograms.
now she weights less than 60kilos.
>> No, she only weighs less than 60 kilograms.
i don\'t know exactly her weights.
>> Though, I don\'t know her exact weight.
in korea, there is oneday one meal. when i was young, i could it.
>> In Korea, there is also this one meal a day. When I was young, I could easily do it.
but now i want to healthy diet.
>> But now, I want to do a healthy diet.
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