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2021-06-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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English was difficult for me since I was young. So, When I have to use english, I used to have no confidence. One day, I thought that It would be nice to change weakness into strength. I felt like overcoming. Also, I like traveling abroad. I want to be able to express my thinking freely during the trip.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

I\'m glad you were able to overcome your weakness. I like how motivated you are to study English. Keep it up! ^^

~~Teacher Kate

English was difficult for me since I was young.

>>English has been difficult for me since I was young.
So, When I have to use english, I used to have no confidence.

>>So, Whenever I used English, I used to have no confidence.
One day, I thought that It would be nice to change weakness into strength.

>>CORRECT!

I felt like overcoming.

>>I felt like overcoming my weaknesses.
Also, I like traveling abroad.

>>CORRECT!

I want to be able to express my thinking freely during the trip.

>>CORRECT!

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