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My greatest gift is my mom and dad because my parents are my everything.
I can\'t live when without my parents.
Anyone wouldn\'t live without their parents.
I\'m really happy because I can feel that my parents love me.
The way I feel is that my parents look at me is very cozy and friendly.
You can feel it even if you don\'t look like that.
I really love my parents so much.
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Keep up the good work!
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Teacher Annie (^^)
My greatest gift is my mom and dad because my parents are my everything.
>>> CORRECT
I can\'t live when without my parents.
>>> I can\'t live without my parents.
Anyone wouldn\'t live without their parents.
>>> CORRECT
I\'m really happy because I can feel that my parents love me.
>>> CORRECT
The way I feel is that my parents look at me is very cozy and friendly.
>>> The way my parents look at me feels very cozy and friendly.
You can feel it even if you don\'t look like that.
>>> You can feel it even if you don\'t look at them.
I really love my parents so much.
>>> CORRECT
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