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학생이 쓴 원문
Jeonju is close to here. I want to talk about Jeonju Folk Village. There are famous places in Gunsan and three famous places in Iksan, but I can\'t explain them well. There are Ungpo Gomnaru, Mireuksa Temple Site, Jewelry Museum, and 99-kan traditional houses where the rich lived.
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Happy Friday Ms. [Name] [이름]! Today I would like to appreciate you on your BIRTHDAY! Happy Birthday! Thank you for doin your best in the class. Keep it up and never give up! Stay well.
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Jeonju is close to here.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>>Jeonju is close to my city.
I want to talk about Jeonju Folk Village.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> Let me talk about Jeonju Folk Village.
There are famous places in Gunsan and three famous places in Iksan, but I can\'t explain them well.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> There are famous places in Gunsan and three famous places in Iksan, but I can\'t tell you in detail.
There are Ungpo Gomnaru, Mireuksa Temple Site, Jewelry Museum, and 99-kan traditional houses where the rich lived.
>>> There is the Unngpo Gomnaru, Mireuksa Temple Site, Jewelry Museum, and 99-kan traditional houses where the rich ones lived.
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