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Koreans push through the door when it says \'push\' when they open it. However, Koreans ignore and push if it says \'pull\'. Of course, there are people who want to do it\' Because people in our country have a habit of doing it quickly. And our country is a divided country. So our people are a country that seeks peace and unification. Also, King Sejong made Hangul in Korea, and we are a country of Eastern courtesy. So I use honorifics to adults and strangers, unlike other countries. So foreigners find it difficult to learn Korean.
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Koreans push through the door when it says \'push\' when they open it.
>>> Koreans push the door to open it when it says \'push\' on the sign.
However, Koreans ignore and push if it says \'pull\'.
>>> However, Koreans ignore the sign and push even if it says \'pull\'.
Of course, there are people who want to do it\' Because people in our country have a habit of doing it quickly.
>>> Of course, there are people who want to do it right because people in the country are used to the habit of doing things quickly.
And our country is a divided country. So our people are a country that seeks peace and unification.
>>> Also, our country is a divided country so we are people seeking peace and unification as a whole.
Also, King Sejong made Hangul in Korea, and we are a country of Eastern courtesy.
>>> Also, King Sejong made Hangul for Korea, and we are a country of Eastern courtesy.
So I use honorifics to adults and strangers, unlike other countries.
>>> So I use honorifics to adults and to strangers, unlike in other countries.
So foreigners find it difficult to learn Korean.
>>> CORRECT
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