homework
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What’s the best place you’ve ever been to?
i have the best places that i\'ve ever been to. it is france england,pucket and singapore.
pucket and singapore have many activities. i wanna go to signgapore and go to the zoo in singapore. i could see animals more closer.
i could swim in the ocean in pucket.
england has a lot of beautiful old sculptures. it is shulrock\' s country.
fance has eiffel tower
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i have the best places that i\'ve ever been to.
>> There are plenty of best places I have been to.
it is france england,pucket and singapore.
>> They are France, England, Phuket, and Singapore.
pucket and singapore have many activities.
>> Phuket, and Singapore have many other activities.
i wanna go to signgapore and go to the zoo in singapore.
>> I want to go to Singapore again and visit its zoos.
i could see animals more closer.
>> So, I could see the animals closer.
i could swim in the ocean in pucket.
>> I went swimming in the beaches of Phuket,
england has a lot of beautiful old sculptures.
>> England has a lot of beautiful old sculptures.
it is shulrock\' s country.
>> It is where Sherlock\'s from.
fance has eiffel tower
>> And for France, it\'s the Eiffel tower.
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