homework
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What is the longest journey you have ever made?
before 6 years, when i was 21 years old, i had ever made journey for 2weeks. it was may the longest journey. i watched the drama sherlock. i falled in love old and beautiful building in the drama in england. specially big ben. so i went to england alone.
What’s the best way to travel? (By plane, ship, train, car, etc.)
the best way to travel is by plane, if you want to go somewhere so far.
plane is so expensive, but you can go there more fast. so you can have more travel time.
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before 6 years, when i was 21 years old, i had ever made journey for 2weeks. it was may the longest journey.
>> When I was 21 years old, I went on a long vacation for two weeks and that was six years ago.
i watched the drama sherlock.
>> I watched the drama, Sherlock Holmes.
i falled in love old and beautiful building in the drama in england.
>> I fell in love with the old and beautiful buildings on that drama, which is in England.
specially big ben. so i went to england alone.
>> Especially big ben, so I traveled to England alone.
the best way to travel is by plane, if you want to go somewhere so far.
>> The best way to travel is by plane if you want to go somewhere far.
plane is so expensive, but you can go there more fast.
>> Traveling by plane is so expensive, but you can go to your destination faster.
so you can have more travel time.
>> So, you can have more time to tour around.
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