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2012-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Michelle

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Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. If you go to the museums, you can see the culture of country easily. There are many museums in Korea. They are not famous in the world. But you can see the lifestyle in Korea as visiting the museums.

강사 첨삭

Hi. Amy!Thank you for making your homework. You\'ve got an excellent idea! Keep it up!Remember:\"A /AN\" is used to refer to a non-specific or non-particular member of the group. For example, \"I would like to go see a movie.\" Here, we\'re not talking about a specific movie. We\'re talking about any movie. There are many movies, and I want to see any movie. I don\'t have a specific one in mind. When you have a single, countable English noun, you must always have an article before it.Teacher MichelleHere are some corrections for you:Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. >>CorrectWhy do you think people visit museums? >>CorrectUse specific reasons and examples to support your answer.>>CorrectIf you go to the museums, you can see the culture of country easily.>>If you go to the museums, you can see the culture of a country easily.There are many museums in Korea.>>CorrectThey are not famous in the world. >>CorrectBut you can see the lifestyle in Korea as visiting the museums. >>But you can see the lifestyle in Korea by visiting the museums.

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