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Yes, I think watching too many horror movies will make peoples scared easily.
Because If I watch a scary movie, I don\'t want it to happen to me.
Also, If I watch a ghost movie, I\'m afraid ghosts will appear in the dark.
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Yes, I think watching too many horror movies will make peoples scared easily.
>>> Yes, I think watching too many horror movies will make people get scared easily.
Because If I watch a scary movie, I don\'t want it to happen to me.
>>> Because if I watch a scary movie, I don\'t want it to happen to me.
Also, If I watch a ghost movie, I\'m afraid ghosts will appear in the dark.
>>> Also, If I watch a movie with ghosts, I\'m afraid that ghosts will appear in the dark.
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