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2021-06-28 · 첨삭 강사 Quenny

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What do you usually do during breaks or lunchtime? It is divided into when I have online classes and I have face-to-face classes. When I have online classes, I have my lunch. Because it\'s tight to have lunch, how can I take a rest in the left time? When I have face-to-face classes, I have my lunch and play with my classmates. Usally, we play chess or card games. Because it has enough time to play something during lunch time. If it doesn\'t have enough time, we continue the gmae when the class over.

강사 첨삭

Hi Paul,
Recess represents an essential, planned respite from rigorous cognitive tasks. It affords a time to rest, play, imagine, think, moves, and socialize. Breaktimes increase classroom engagement and make children more attentive and more productive. reduce disruptive behavior in the classroom. help children practice social skills and role-play with peers. Enjoy your breaktime and lunchtime. 
~ Teacher Quenny
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What do you usually do during breaks or lunchtime?
>> What do you usually do during breaks or lunchtime?
It is divided into when I have online classes and I have face-to-face classes.
>>It is divided into two when I have online classes and I have face-to-face classes.
When I have online classes, I have my lunch.
>>When I have online classes, I have my lunch break. 
Because it\'s tight to have lunch, how can I take a rest in the left time?
>>Because it\'s tight to have lunch, how can I take a rest in the time left.?
When I have face-to-face classes, I have my lunch and play with my classmates.
>>When I have face-to-face classes, I have my lunchtime and I play with my classmates.
Usally, we play chess or card games. Because it has enough time to play something during lunch time.
>>Usually, we play chess or card games because we have enough time to play something during lunchtime.
If it doesn\'t have enough time, we continue the gmae when the class over.
>>If we don\'t have enough time, we continue the game when the class over.
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What do you usually do during breaks or lunchtime?

It is divided into when I have online classes and I have face-to-face classes.
When I have online classes, I have my lunch.
Because it\'s tight to have lunch, how can I take a rest in the left time?
When I have face-to-face classes, I have my lunch and play with my classmates.
Usally, we play chess or card games. Because it has enough time to play something during lunch time.
If it doesn\'t have enough time, we continue the gmae when the class over.

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