Homework

2021-06-30 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Q:HOMEWORK: Kindly answer the question in essay form. Did you enjoy festivals better when you were still younger or do you enjoy them more now that you are older? A:I think I liked festivals more when I was young because I was full of energy and enjoyed them more

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Hi [이름]! ^^

That\'s true! When there was no pandemic, festivals are really great. People gather together to celebrate and have a good time. Hopefully, this virus would be gone so that we can go back to enjoying it again.

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I think I liked festivals more when I was young because I was full of energy and enjoyed them more.

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