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I want to be a Doraemon.
Because Doraemon has very cute and round hand.
I think Doraemon\\\'s charm is very cute round body and cute personality.
and I like red bean bread and Doraemon like red bean bread too.
I think Doraemon and I look just each other.
also, Doraemon has magic pouch that brings out anything.
I really want to get Doraemon\'s magic pouch.
So, I want to be a Doraemon character.
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I want to be a Doraemon.
>>> I want to be Doraemon.
Because Doraemon has very cute and round hand.
>>> Because Doraemon has very cute and round hands.
I think Doraemon\\\'s charm is very cute round body and cute personality.
>>> I think Doraemon\'s charm is his very cute, round body and cute personality.
and I like red bean bread and Doraemon like red bean bread too.
>>> also, I like red bean bread and Doraemon likes red bean bread too.
I think Doraemon and I look just each other.
>>> I think Doraemon and I look just very similar to each other.
also, Doraemon has magic pouch that brings out anything.
>>> Moreover, Doraemon has a magic pouch that brings out anything.
I really want to get Doraemon\'s magic pouch.
>>> CORRECT
So, I want to be a Doraemon character.
>>> CORRECT
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