Homework

2021-07-01 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

학생이 쓴 원문

Homework. I get help when others see what I do and help myself. But I don\'t ask for help.Because I think each of us should do what we have to do on our own.And I only plan what I can do.If I can\'t do it, I\'ll quit. You sent me that something to think about, so you make me think a lot. I didn\'t think about what what to do that on what is urgent and on what is importtant. I think I equated urgent thing and with important thing. I think we should spend short time on urgent and enough time on important thing. Thank you for letting me think.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Ms. [Name] [이름]! Thank you once again for doing your homework. I\'ve got something to read from my very good students ^^

~Aki:)

I get help when others see what I do and help myself.

>>> CORRECT!

OR>>> I get help when other people see that I cannot do it myslef.

But I don\'t ask for help.

>>> CORRECT!

OR>>> Honestly, I don\'t ask for someone\'s help

Because I think each of us should do what we have to do on our own.

>>> Because I think each of us whould do what we can on our own.

And I only plan what I can do. If I can\'t do it, I\'ll quit.

>>> And I only plan the things that I can I do, If I don\'t , I\'ll just quit.

You sent me that something to think about, so you make me think a lot.

>>> You sent me this homework and you really made me think of it.
I didn\'t think about what what to do that on what is urgent and on what is important.

>>> I have not thought about which one should do first; the urgent or the important.

I think I equated urgent thing and with important thing.

>>> I though urgent thing and important thing are the same.

I think we should spend short time on urgent and enough time on important thing.

>>> CORRECT!

OR>>> I think we need to pay less attention on urgent things and focus more on important things.

Thank you for letting me think.

>>> CORRECT!

OR>>> Thank you for making me ponder.

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