homework
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Do you prefer spending time with your family or friends? Why?
i prefer spending time alone.
i sometimes would feel lonely, but i don\'t need careful other people and i can do anythings that i want.
if i eat something with other people, i have to ask his opinions. if i watch a movie with other people, i have to care about it that he want to eat popcorn or eat nothing, where he want to seat.
it is tired.
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i prefer spending time alone.
>> I prefer spending time alone.
i sometimes would feel lonely, but i don\'t need careful other people and i can do anythings that i want.
>> I sometimes would feel lonely, but I don\'t need to be taken care of by people and I can do anything that I want.
if i eat something with other people, i have to ask his opinions.
>> If I eat with other people, I have to ask their opinions.
if i watch a movie with other people, i have to care about it that he want to eat popcorn or eat nothing, where he want to seat.
>> If I see a movie with other people, I have to care about what they want, whether to have popcorn or not or where they want to be seated.
it is tired.
>> It is tiring.
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