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The best way to prevent cell phone addiction is
First. It is to limit the time of using the cell phone.
Second. It is to make another hobbys. Then I will be able to cut back on using my cell phone. because. I do another hobbys.
Third. It is I don\'t intall too many games on my phone. because If I don\'t see the games you\'ll feel less inclined to play it.
these sre the best ways for me to sanction cell phone use.
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The best way to prevent cell phone addiction is
>>> The best way to prevent cell phone addiction is the following.
First. It is to limit the time of using the cell phone.
>>> First, is to limit the time of using the cell phone.
Second. It is to make another hobbys. Then I will be able to cut back on using my cell phone. because. I do another hobbys.
>>> Second is to make another hobby. In doing so, I will be able to cut back on using my cell phone because I do other hobbies.
Third. It is I don\'t intall too many games on my phone. because If I don\'t see the games you\'ll feel less inclined to play it.
>>> Third is not to install too many games on my phone because if I don\'t see the games then I\'ll feel less inclined to play them.
these sre the best ways for me to sanction cell phone use.
>>> These are the best ways for me to sanction cell phone use.
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