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2021-07-02 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

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I don\'t really sympathize with other people\'s feelings. So i want to improve my sympathy. My mother is caring person. So I want to resemble my mother\'s consideration. I often eat egg tarts. Because it is scrumptious. PS. I\'m sorry I was absent. I wasn\'t feeling well in the last class, so I took my meds and stretched out. I\'m so sorry.

강사 첨삭

Good work, [이름]! I am glad that your sentences are mostly correct. I hope you are feeling better now. See you later!-Faith-
I don\'t really sympathize with other people\'s feelings.
>> CORRECT
OR I am not sympathetic towards others.
So i want to improve my sympathy.
>> So, I want to improve my sympathy.
My mother is caring person. 
>> My mother is a caring person. 
So I want to resemble my mother\'s consideration.
>> So, I want to resemble my mother\'s qualities or traits.
I often eat egg tarts. 
Because it is scrumptious.
>> I often eat egg tarts because it is scrumptious.
PS. I\'m sorry I was absent.
>> CORRECT
I wasn\'t feeling well in the last class, so I took my meds and stretched out. 
>> CORRECT
I\'m so sorry.
>> CORRECT

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