Homework.

2021-07-05 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

학생이 쓴 원문

Unit 10 different feeling homework.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Always answer in complete sentences. ^^

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

1. The things that make me happy are, playing soccer, going outside to play with my friends, eating delicious food and winning a game.

2. The things that make me feel sad are loosing a game, getting hurt, being scolded, getting hit by a ball and rainy weathers.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기