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Yes, I believe music can heal.
Because there are Music psychotherapy.
If something sad happened to me, and I listen to music, I feel healed.
And I think music change people\'s emotion.
when I listen exciting music my emotion change exciting.
Music heals me, and change my feeling.
That\'s why music is amazing!!!!
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Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)
Yes, I believe music can heal.
>>> CORRECT
Because there are Music psychotherapy.
>>> Because there is something called Music Psychotherapy.
If something sad happened to me, and I listen to music, I feel healed.
>>> If something sad happened to me, I just listen to music and I feel healed.
And I think music change people\'s emotion.
>>> And I think music can change people\'s emotions.
when I listen exciting music my emotion change exciting.
>>> When I listen to exciting music my emotions change, I feel excited.
Music heals me, and change my feeling.
>>> Music heals me and changes my feeling.
That\'s why music is amazing!
>>> CORRECT
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