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What\\\'s your favorite food?
my favorite food is korea kimchi fried rice. i can eat it everyday, every meal. i never get sick of it. i can make it, if i have kimchi and rice. i just fried them. but if i have spam or meat, i can eat more delicious. i originally eat often, whenever if i don\\\'t eat something. but now, i can\\\'t often eat. because i\\\'m on a diet. i want to loose my weight. so i exercise 2 times a week with my trainer. thank you!
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Good day, Ava!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
my favorite food is korea kimchi fried rice.
>> My favorite food is the Korean kimchi fried rice.
i can eat it everyday, every meal.
>> I can eat it everyday, every meal.
i never get sick of it.
>> I never get sick of it.
i can make it, if i have kimchi and rice.
>> I can make it, if I have kimchi and rice.
OR >> I can make it, if I have kimchi and rice at home.
i just fried them.
>> I just fry them.
but if i have spam or meat, i can eat more delicious.
>> But if I have a spam or meat, I can eat more because it\'s more delicious.
i originally eat often, whenever if i don\\\'t eat something.
>> I originally eat it often, whenever I don\'t eat something.
but now, i can\\\'t often eat.
>> But now, I can\'t often eat it, because I\'m on a diet.
because i\\\'m on a diet.
>> But now, I can\'t often eat it, because I\'m on a diet.
i want to loose my weight.
>> I want to lose weight.
so i exercise 2 times a week with my trainer.
>> So I exercise 2 times a week with my trainer.
thank you!
>> Thank you!
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