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In my opinion, if a child wants to stop having nightmares, he or she can stop having nightmares by creating a lot of hobbies and doing a lot of things he or she wants to do.
And I think the cause of nightmares is stress, because when you\'re stressed, when you\'re having nightmares, you\'re stressed, and you can\'t stop nightmares.
And if you\'re having a nightmare because you have a trauma, I think it\'ll be helpful to find out how to cure it.
Actually, I don\'t know because I had not many nightmares.....
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In my opinion, if a child wants to stop having nightmares, he or she can stop having nightmares by creating a lot of hobbies and doing a lot of things he or she wants to do.
>>> In my opinion, if a child wants to stop having nightmares, he or she can stop having them by doing a lot of hobbies and a lot of things that he or she wants to do.
And I think the cause of nightmares is stress, because when you\'re stressed, when you\'re having nightmares, you\'re stressed, and you can\'t stop nightmares.
>>> I think the main cause of nightmares is stress, because when you\'re stressed, then you\'ll having nightmares. When you\'re stressed, you can\'t stop having nightmares.
And if you\'re having a nightmare because you have a trauma, I think it\'ll be helpful to find out how to cure it.
>>> CORRECT
OR: If you\'re having a nightmare because you have a trauma, I think it\'ll be helpful to find out how to cure it by seeking a professional expert.
Actually, I don\'t know because I had not many nightmares.....
>>> Actually, I don\'t know because I had no experience with nightmares before.
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